2) The common denominator on all the feedback I received is that I did not discuss how the influence of my company would be able to successfully bring back customers to stores and increase revenue during this time of pandemic. I made sure to include a little more in my pitch about how it helps people feel more safe and assured, to be able to continue business as usual.
3) Obviously this time around, the pitch felt a lot more complete as I was able to fill the holes in the persuasive argument that is my pitch and form a more holistic idea. I feel a lot more comfortable in front of the camera and some of it is memorized, after a little refreshers. I think I have done a better job at vocalizing and better job with my hand motions as well.
Hey Brian, great job on your last elevator pitch. I feel like it has been an improvement since your first one and you have fixed the issues you received in the feedback. Its great that you are more comfortable presenting the information and that you feel more at ease in front of the cameras, that means you are improving your overall skills for future pitches. You were definitely more dynamic and it was a great pitch overall.
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