1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cm18VUHCbA4
2) Unfortunately, when I filmed this for the first elevator pitch assignment, there was an error with the upload and I could not get the video up on time before the assignment closed out. Due to this, I never received feedback and never got any useful information. However, if I were to offer criticism to myself I would probably start talking more about the solution we provide and with more detail.
3) I did not change anything, as I was unable to receive feedback due to the assignment closing out before I could post.
Brian,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch needs to tell me how the cost of your services can be paid back or offset quickly from not being shut down and losing revenue. I recommend saying something like “You know how to run your business. We know how to make your business safe and train your employees so that you can continue to concentrate on your business”.
Brian,
ReplyDeleteI also agree with Brians feedback. If your services lose revenue due to people going back to normal sanitation ways because coronavirus fades out you will need a plan of action that will prevent you from losing your business and possibly encounter debt. Inform customers that your services will always be needed in order to prevent another uncontrollable spread of a virus. Great job!